Award-winning author, Pamela S. Thibodeaux is the Co-Founder and a lifetime
member of Bayou Writers Group in Lake Charles, Louisiana. Multi-published in
romantic fiction as well as creative non-fiction, her writing has been tagged
as, “Inspirational with an Edge!” ™ and reviewed as “steamier and grittier than the typical Christian novel without decreasing the message.”
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I first penned the story now titled In His Sight, as an entry
for a contest Pelican Book Group was hosting in 2008. The working title at that
time was The Gift. The hero, Carson
Alexander as the gift of ‘sight’ or ‘prophecy’ or perhaps he’s just really
tuned in, tapped in, and turned on to his intuition. Whatever you call it, he
is able to predict with gut feelings or premonitions some event in the near
future. Anyway, I began the story in 2008 then my husband became ill and passed
away in 2009. Needless to say this story sat unfinished for quite sometime. In
early 2010 I thought….If I don’t finish
this story I may never write again. So, I contacted my editor at Pelican
Book Group and asked what changes I’d need to make in order to finish and
submit the story since the contest had long since been over. We discussed the
options and I told her I’d send it as soon as humanly possible. I did, the
story was accepted, I signed the contract and then…..
I received my first round of edits. The editor had taken 30
pages out of a 70 page story!!!
That would shock me on a normal day but considering my
emotional state at the time I FREAKED. I emailed her and the Sr. Editor and
basically had a melt down.
My editor, bless her heart, emailed me back in a hurry….
“Wait! We’re not deleting that information, we’re rearranging it. You have a
great suspense story here but you’re giving away too many details along the
way.”
Suspense? Me? Surprise!
I don’t write romantic suspense, I write romance. The
suspense element just showed up and took over without my even being aware of it
LOL!
We talked some more until I understood what she meant and
agreed to give it a try. In the course of editing, The Gift just didn’t seem to work anymore – not a very suspenseful
title–right? In His Sight kept coming to mind so I finished the edits and
sent them in with a proposed title change. The editor was thrilled and agreed
whole-heartedly on the title change and In His Sight was published July 30th
2010.
Grade school teacher Carson
Alexander has a gift—a gift that has driven a wedge between him and his family.
Worse, it’s put him at odds with God. Feeling alone and misunderstood, Carson
views God’s gift of prophecy as the worst kind of curse…that is until he meets
Lorelei Conner, landscape artist extraordinaire, and perhaps the one person who
may need Carson and his gift more than anyone ever has.
Lorelei Connor is a mother on the run. Her abusive ex-husband has followed her all over the country trying to steal their daughter. Distrusting of men and needing to keep on the move, she’s surprised by her desire to remain close to Carson Alexander. Through her fear and hesitation, she must learn to rely on God to guide her—not an easy task when He’s prompting her to trust a man.
Can their relationship withstand the tragedy lurking on the horizon?
Lorelei Connor is a mother on the run. Her abusive ex-husband has followed her all over the country trying to steal their daughter. Distrusting of men and needing to keep on the move, she’s surprised by her desire to remain close to Carson Alexander. Through her fear and hesitation, she must learn to rely on God to guide her—not an easy task when He’s prompting her to trust a man.
Can their relationship withstand the tragedy lurking on the horizon?
Excerpt: Carson
Alexander walked through his classroom and tugged desks into a semi circle
around the dry eraser board. One thing he loved about teaching sixth-grade
English at Stars Crossing Middle School
was that the classes were so small. With no more than fifteen students at a
time he could work closely with each one and give them the attention they
needed and deserved. Another thing he appreciated was the lack of standard or
strict curriculum. As long as the children passed the exams set forth by the
Department of Education, he could teach as he pleased.
So far, his kids excelled, maintaining some of the highest
scores in the entire school. Pride filled his soul and caused his heart to
swell, chest to puff out.
Pride cometh before
the fall.
The Voice echoed in his mind, ricocheted through his soul.
He shrugged off the warning, walked to his desk and picked up the name tags for
each incoming student. He thumbed through the stack, pondered each one and
wondered about the child attached to the name….Jenny & Jerry Smith – twins
or un-related? One name struck him hard, sent unnamed emotion curling through
his system – Laurel Connor.
He hadn’t heard the name Laurel in years and then, used only
as a surname or when referring to the small town in Mississippi from whence he
came. He moved to Stars Crossing, Tennessee
five years ago for two reasons. One, the teaching position and two, the town
though smaller, reminded him of home.
Memories crashed through the floodgates he’d built around
his heart…..the huge two-story house and two-hundred acre farm where he grew
up. His seven siblings, parents who adored him – their eldest son, and the pain
of losing everything he held near and dear to his heart.
Tears threatened. His vision blurred, hands began to shake. Carson swallowed the lump
in his throat, put the stack down, and shoved his hands into the front pockets
of his slacks. Adrenaline pumped through him, caused his pulse to skitter and
jump. Saliva pooled in his mouth. By sheer force he willed his emotions under
control. The bell rang and he turned to greet the children who rushed into the
room. He watched as one-by-one they filed in and took a seat.
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Thanks for having me Paula!
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PamT
Great inside scoop and excerpt. Thanks for sharing.
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PamT
Love the excerpt, Pam and the cover, too! 😍
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorite covers too, Darcy. Thanks for stopping by. Appreciate your support!!
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PamT
I've always been told I write "short," so I would have acted like you did Pam, if someone told me to cut thousands of words. I'm glad you hung in there.
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Oh Barbara, you have no idea how shocked I was, but I'm glad I hung in there too. Thanks for dropping by.
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PamT
If the story is half as interesting as the backstory, it's definitely a winner!
ReplyDeleteI only hope, Carlene :-)
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PamT
As a fellow writer, it's always interesting to me to find out how and why a particular story got written.
ReplyDeleteI always find that interesting too, Jacquie.
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PamT
I love it when the characters take over a story and take it in a new direction. Do you think that you will write suspense again (next time on purpose)?
ReplyDeleteI don't know Stacey. One of the disadvantages of a SOTP writer LOL! Thanks for stopping by!
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PamT
It sounds like you were fortunate to get an insightful editor. Congratulations, Pam, and best of luck with your novel.
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PamT
What an interesting backstory! The cuts must've been painful, and what a surprise to have it categorized differently than you expected! Congrats on working it all out and seeing the story through.
ReplyDeleteThe cuts weren't so bad after I understood what the editor saw, Emaily but still a challenge to get through. I'm glad I worked it out too. Thanks for stopping by!
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PamT
Thanks for sharing your scary editing experience. I'm glad it all worked out.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Zoe for stopping by!
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PamT
I love the backstory on this. It sounds like you had a very compassionate and professional editor.
ReplyDeleteYes both my editor and the Sr. Editor were very compassionate, professional and understanding. Thanks for dropping by Alina!
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PamT
Y'all have been chatting it up here while I've been at school. I, too, just love to hear about the backstory of a story. I think it makes it even more intriguing to read when you know "extra" stuff. Again, thanks for sharing with us, Pamela!
ReplyDeleteThank YOU Paula!
DeleteI love learning how a story came about. If I'd been told to cut almost half of my story, I would've freaked, too. Good thing you didn't give up, Pam. Best wishes.
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane! I appreciate your support.
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PamT
This is another amazing story about how characters and plot can intervene (aka the Universe) and move a novel or short story in a different direction than the author intended. Thanks for sharing this experience, Pamela.
ReplyDeleteYep! Love it when that happens Patricia.
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PamT
Enjoyed the story about your editor. I think all writers freak out a bit when their precious work gets re-ordered to take out. I've finally learned to trust a bit more...but I still ponder on it. Best of luck with your writing.
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PamT
Pam, what an adventure you had with In His Sight. I pray it encourages readers for years to come. Cheers
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Marilyn! I appreciate your support in stopping by and commenting.
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PamT
Glad to know I'm not the only one who freaks out with edits. Love the excerpt.
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PamT